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记叙文-My First Stay at Home

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  My First Stay at Home
  写作要求:
  请根据下列要求,以My First Stay at Home为题,写一篇100字左右的文章。
  内容要点:
  1、父母出差,自己一个人在家
  2、自己照顾自己
  3、难忘有意义的经历
  要点提示:
  1.memorable experience
  2.on business
  3.take care of oneself.
  思路指津:
  时态:描述自己过去的经历自然用一般过去时
  谋篇布局:文章以时间为线索,描述自己在家的行为
  主题:难忘的经历,所以中心应该突出如何难忘,如何有意义
  My First Stay at Home
  参考范文:
  My first stay at home alone was memorable. When I was twelve, once both of my mother and father were away on business, and I had been all by myself for two days. My parents left early the first day, and I got up soon after they left. In the first evening I was a little scared, so I turned on all the lights. I actually kept the light on in my bedroom the whole night. For fear of getting up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near my bed and set the alarms respectively at 6:00, 6:10, and 6:15. In order to prove that I could take care of myself, I washed my own clothes the second afternoon, though I could wait for Mother to do it. I really felt proud of myself and thought I was a big girl.
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